Diskussion:Revox

Request for better language

Hello,

I tried to transport information about Revox from de.wikipedia to da.wikipedia. Unfortunately I cannot assess the translation after Revox oprettet i Zürich ... and overestimated glosbe translate. Please compare especially with de:Revox and correct or improve the text /expressions and grammar in the da. article if necessary. Thank you very much in advance for your help.

PS: For the future I learned better writing a stub only.

Thank you for understanding. Kind regards, --Wikisympathisant (diskussion) 10. maj 2020, 22:50 (CEST)